I had to have a friend and an adult review my blog and give their opinions. They had to answer four questions:
1. What was your first impression from the blog?
2. What in the blog captured your attention most?
3. What on the blog distracted you most?
Here are their answers.
My friend Yang
1. Her first impression was that it was good.
2. The thing that captured her attention was that I put my answers for things in bold.
3. There was nothing that distracted Yang.
4. I can improve my blog by adding some photos or links.
My mom
1. Her first impression is that my blog was clever and interesting.
2. The thing that captured her attention most was the haikus.
3. The thing that distracted her was all of the spelling and typos.
4. I can improve my blog by proofreading my posts and posting more often.